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From the last from cover, my focus group gave me some feedback. They said that I would need to ad more cover-lines in order to meet the conventions of an entertainment magazine. I have decided to move the original top-line/strap-line to the bottom and add a new strap-line/top-line. I have added in a barcode and another cover-line near the models face to replace the larger puff. I have decided to make the puff smaller so, I could add more cover-lines. I have asked my focus group the about the placement of the puff would be most suitable and 4/5 people preferred cover number 1 as this would draw more attention to the models face which would help create a stronger intertextual reference.
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